I got a English lecture, and learned more about the atmosphere. Today was our meeting with Dan, he helped us get to the point. He explained to use that he didnt know that much about the sciecnce background, but by reading a well written PDR, he should be able to do an experiment. He helped us with grammatical, punction, and other mild errors. He also made me create a list 0of things to watch out for in writing other papers., which were: being consistant with same words, capital & lower case letters. Use spaces after initialize words ( g, km, m, ect.). Also use key words and words that stand out so u just dont have a simple paper and people would want to read it. I learned a few other things based on how and hownot to use "HOWEVER with a ;".